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Thursday, June 19, 2008

Unintentional intentionality and post-juvenilia expressed (proudly)

I love how things just come out when you're writing. Tonight, while writing a scene in which my main character is trying to convince a friend to take care of his psychotic cat while he's away, he feels her resistance begin to break down... and then he says:

My hands are in her crack now, pulling in opposite directions.

Okay, the sexual deviance in there was REALLY, TOTALLY, UNAMBIGUOUSLY unintended. I was simply trying to say that he felt her resolve weakening and he was working at changing her mind. Which, I think is there, buried beneath a mound (pile?) of innuendo. Which is why it has to stay. At least for now.



synergy boy said...

oh, yeah, baby. although of course you've got the story let it tell you what should be in it or not...but that's freakin' awesome. hee!

Clifford said...

The story dictates all!

Kate S said...

LOL. Sounds a bit painful...

Clifford said...
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Clifford said...

Ouch! Yeah, I'd guess!

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