I love how things just come out when you're writing. Tonight, while writing a scene in which my main character is trying to convince a friend to take care of his psychotic cat while he's away, he feels her resistance begin to break down... and then he says:
My hands are in her crack now, pulling in opposite directions.
Okay, the sexual deviance in there was REALLY, TOTALLY, UNAMBIGUOUSLY unintended. I was simply trying to say that he felt her resolve weakening and he was working at changing her mind. Which, I think is there, buried beneath a mound (pile?) of innuendo. Which is why it has to stay. At least for now.
Heh.
5 comments:
oh, yeah, baby. although of course you've got the story let it tell you what should be in it or not...but that's freakin' awesome. hee!
The story dictates all!
LOL. Sounds a bit painful...
Ouch! Yeah, I'd guess!
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